Friday, March 15, 2019

Writing Prompt 1 Winner

Congratulations to Sean M., 16, of Lincoln, Nebraska, for submitting the winning response to Weekend Writing Prompt 1.

The prompt was: Your parents accidentally leave something sitting out that you were never meant to discover.

Here's Sean's story.

Maybe I Should Have Just Asked

Now, before you do anything rash, give me a minute or two to explain what’s been going on. I think you’ll agree that it’s all my parents’ fault, and I really shouldn’t be blamed for any of it.

I’ll be the first to admit that I’ve always been a bit too curious for my own good, and it’s gotten me into trouble before, though nothing like this. Even so, I’d never though too much about the file cabinet that Dad keeps locked all the time. And I’d never even seen the lock box that was sitting open on his desk yesterday afternoon. But Dad freaked when I walked in and saw the box. He shoved some papers into it and locked it before I could get a look at them. The locked box went into the file cabinet, and it got locked, too.

Despite my curiosity, that might have been the end of it. Dad keeps the keys on him at all times. I had no chance of getting into the file cabinet without some serious tools, and there was no way I could get at the box without leaving major evidence that I had.

I asked Dad what was in the box.

“Financial papers,” he said. “Life insurance, stuff like that. Nothing you need to worry about.”

Uh huh. Right. Sure, maybe parents don’t like their teenage kids thinking about life insurance and death and all that junk. I get that. But Dad’s reaction was way overboard for something that simple.

Just then, Mom pulled into the driveway, back from the grocery store. Dad went out to help her unload. I lagged behind for a few seconds, fake tying my shoe, then checked the top of the desk as soon as Dad was out of sight. Notes from work were scattered around, along with several spreadsheets (Dad’s an accountant, possibly the dullest job in the history of the world). I was about to give up when I saw something that didn’t fit tucked most of the way under a page full of numbers.

It was a birth certificate. No big deal. I had seen mine a couple of times, most recently when I got my temps. I was about to tuck it back where it was when I read the name.

Faustino Torini.

I had never heard the name before. At first, I wondered if it was some distant uncle or something, but this guy was born in 2003, the same year as me. The same day, too.

“Tony, come give us a hand!” Mom called.

My time was up. I had only a split second to make a decision. I made the wrong one. I should have just put it back on the desk, but I didn’t. I slipped the birth certificate into my pocket instead.

After supper, I headed upstairs and pulled the paper out from under my pillow where I had stashed it. There was no question about it. Faustino Torini, born January 17th, 2003. The exact same day as me. But this kid was born in New York City. His parents were Giorgio Torini and Delfina Speranza, also both born in New York. I’d never heard of either of them, either.

Except...

Giorgio’s birthday was June 9th, just like Dad’s. And Delfina’s birthday was November 22nd, just like Mom’s. I thought the years might be the same, too, though I couldn’t remember for sure.

But I was Anthony Miller, Dad was Michael Miller, and Mom was Angela Watterson Miller. I’d been born in Fostoria, Ohio, and lived here my entire life. My parents were born in Akron and Pittsburgh.

Just what the heck was going on here?

Why did Dad keep a birth certificate for some random kid locked up with his important papers? If that’s really what they were. And what was up with the birth dates?

I suppose I could have asked my parents, but I doubted that I would get any answers, and I would definitely get in serious trouble. Although, being grounded and losing the car keys for a month doesn’t sound so bad in retrospect, given the current situation.

I turned to the internet, instead.

For all the good it did me.

There were exactly zero hits for ‘Faustino Torini.’ Zilch. Nada. It was like the kid never existed. I figured he might go by a nickname, but had no clue what it might be.

‘Delfina Speranza’ turned up a few dozen hits, but they were all in Italian. Same with ‘Giorgio Torini.’ As far as I could tell, none of these people lived in the United States, or ever had.

I went to bed more confused than ever. It looked like I was going to have to confront my parents after all. But that could wait for morning. I wanted to sleep on it first.

There were so many things I might have done differently. I could have never looked for the birth certificate in the first place. I could have left it where it was, unread. I could have asked Mom and Dad about it. I could have not done all those internet searches. I could have tried more variations on the names.

That last one, as it turns out, was rather important. I didn’t know it at the time, but while ‘Giorgio Torini’ had very few hits, if I had tried ‘George Torini’ I would have found quite a few. Most of them about the time he spent as an accountant for the mob, or the trial of several major Mafioso where he turned state’s evidence, landing them in jail, before he was swept away into the witness protection program with his wife Fina and their infant son.

It’s all a matter of trust, you see. If my parents had trusted me more, they would have already told me the truth. If I had trusted them more, I would have asked them what was going on. Instead, I did a bunch of internet searches that lit up the mob’s watch list like a Christmas tree, all of them traceable directly back to me. And when the front door got kicked in at three in the morning, I didn’t instantly jump out a window and start running, because I didn’t know that I should.

And that, Mr. Mob Hitman, is why I’d really rather you didn’t shoot me right now. I’m having a hard time coming to terms with all of this happening so suddenly and feeling rather vulnerable. I need some time to process.

Maybe you could come back in a couple of weeks and we’ll see how things are going then?


Thursday, March 14, 2019

Podcast Contest for Writers Ages 8-13


Calling all #youngwriters – specifically those between 8 and 13 years old. Stone Soup has teamed up with AV Education, which produces the By Kids For Kids – Story Time Podcast. The podcast features stories performed by kids, and now for the first time, written by kids, too!

They are looking for original short stories between 500-1,000 words. For this contest, the theme is climate change. Your challenge: deliver a great story in a fun and accessible style. The Story Time podcast tends towards fantasy, magical, or fairy tale type stories, but any great story is acceptable.

Top prize includes having your story made into a podcast and featured on the Story Time website. First, second, and third prize winners will all have their stories published in Stone Soup as well.

The deadline for entries is April 15.

Check out the Stone Soup contest page for more details and a link to enter your story. Good luck!

C. Wombat


Wednesday, March 13, 2019

Review: Slayer by Kiersten White


One of my all-time favorite TV series has to be Buffy: The Vampire Slayer. I loved it when it came out, I loved it during reruns, I’ve got all of the DVDs, and I’ve watched them all several times. So, when I saw that a new novel was out set in the Buffyverse, I knew I had to read it.

The Watchers have been training and guiding slayers since time immemorial. There are definite rules and expectations set for slayers by the Watcher Council, and Buffy violated every one of them. When she divorced herself from the Council, Buffy weakened it. Then, two years ago, she broke the magic that called young women to be slayers, unleashing a thousand new slayers on the world, decimating the Watcher Council and throwing the few remaining Watchers into complete disarray. And just two months ago, she destroyed the source of magic itself, shutting off Earth from the demon dimensions, and trapping all that remained.

Needless to say, as the daughter of Watchers, Athena (better known as Nina) is far from pleased with Buffy’s actions. She lives in the tiny enclave of remaining Watchers with her twin sister, Artemis, but knows that she will never be a Watcher herself. She has always been the weaker twin, the less aggressive, and has resigned herself to a life as a medic in the service of the Watchers.

But something happened to Nina when Buffy destroyed Seed of Wonder, infusing her with something she doesn’t understand. Fearing it might be a demonic force, Nina never shared what she felt with anyone, not even her twin. When a hellhound suddenly appears and Nina is forced to kill it with her bare hands, the truth is revealed: not only is Nina now a Slayer, but with no more magic in the world, she is the very last of the Slayer line.

White has done a remarkable job of creating a new story and new beginning within the existing world of Buffy. The feel of Slayer is a bit darker than the first few seasons of the TV series, but it matches well with the later seasons and with the comic book series that followed. At the same time, White weaves in the same style of wry humor that Buffy fans expect. Despite a relatively low number of fight scenes, the book maintains a rapid pace, building a taunt and gripping story that goes beyond violent action; again, just what Buffy fans expect.

But even if you’re completely unfamiliar with everything that has come before, you won’t be lost. Slayer stands alone on its own merit, and makes an excellent read for any fan of urban fantasy.

C. Wombat

Monday, March 11, 2019

You Have Five Senses – Use Them!


When you’re asked to describe something, what is your automatic first response? For most of us, we start talking about how it looks. We focus on light, color, texture.

Many authors are the same way. Their books are full of wonderful visual descriptions of people and places. You can almost see yourself in the picture.

But can you hear the picture? Smell it? We have five senses, and as a writer it’s up to you to use them.

Hearing

Close your eyes for a minute and listen to the world around you. Eyes open again? Good. Okay, so what did you hear?

I hear the quiet whir of my computer’s fan, muffled voices coming through the wall, a distant rumble as the furnace turns on.

What does that tell you about my setting?

Obviously, I’m not at Starbucks. I’m not out dancing, or hanging out with friends, or running for my life from a horde of zombies.

Force your characters to close their eyes and listen. Start with the loud, obvious sounds. A plane flying overhead (or a dragon). A jackhammer. Car horns. Swords crashing against shields.

Not only will your readers learn more about your setting, but your characters will, too. The quiet scuff of a foot on the carpet might be the only thing that saves them from the serial killer sneaking up on them.

Having them hear their completely non-romantic best friend whisper “I love you” can change the entire tone of your book. Be sure to listen for it.

Touch

Very often, we can guess what something feels like just by looking at it, and from past experience. A cat’s fur is usually soft and warm, fire is hot, sandpaper is coarse. We don’t need to touch them to know that.

But there are many things that are less obvious. Run your fingers along the wall-is it smooth, textured, rough, warm, cool, damp, slimy?

Is the ground under your feet hard-packed dirt or soft loam? Is the concrete rough or smooth? Does the sandy beach scorch your bare feet, or push coldly up between your toes?

Touch can be an especially strong tool when it’s unexpected. Elegant looking clothes that turn out stiff and scratchy. A metal doorknob that is burning hot because of a fire on the far side, or icy cold because of a ghost.

Smell

We often ignore our sense of smell because we don’t consider it that important. Just as often, we wish we could ignore it because something really stinks. But as a writer, you need to pay attention, especially when you want to feed your characters vital clues.

The faint whiff of gasoline warns of impending arson. The odor of decay promises that the missing camper is nearby, and not as healthy as you had hoped. The alluring scent of perfume rising from the envelope tells you this isn’t hate mail, but far from it.

Smell is also an incredibly strong provoker of memories. The right smell can send you years into your past, to the heavenly aroma of your grandmother’s kitchen whenever she baked cinnamon rolls, or to the sharp antiseptic bite of the hospital room where you held her hand as she slipped away.

Taste

Taste can be one of the hardest senses to use when building descriptions. Let’s face it, other than when we eat, we don’t rely on our sense of taste much at all. But it shouldn’t be overlooked, either.

When your characters kiss, do they taste salty sweat, cherry lip balm, steel braces, sour unbrushed teeth? A bloody lip may taste salty and metallic. You may taste the ozone from an electrical discharge more than you smell it.

And by all means, when your characters are eating, describe how it tastes, especially if it is new, different, delicious, horrible, anything but normal.

Sight

Naturally, vision is very important, and we should never lose sight of it (pun fully intended). But be sure to look past the surface. Search for those tiny details that take your readers beyond the normal, everyday world and immerse them fully in your creation.

While you could fill a book with descriptions that are purely visual, it will be incomplete. Force your readers to experience your writing with all five of their senses, and you’ll keep them coming back for more.

C. Wombat


Saturday, March 9, 2019

Weekend Writing Prompt 2

Describe your house (or somewhere else) using only the senses of hearing, feeling, smell, and taste (no sight!).


If you come up with a good response, please consider sharing it. Complete THIS FORM with your story and some basic info no later than Friday, March 15. I’ll pick my favorite response and share it on the blog the following Friday.

Happy writing, and I look forward to seeing what you come up with!

C. Wombat

Thursday, March 7, 2019

Sarah Mook Poetry Contest

Now in its 15th year, the Sarah Mook Poetry Contest is for students in grades K-12. It includes cash prizes of $100, $50, and $25 for first, second, and third place in each category: kindergarten through second grade, third through fifth, sixth through eighth, and ninth through twelfth.

Previous winners may enter again with new poems.

Rules:
  • you may enter no more than two poems
  • the poems must be your original work
  • you must be a K-12 student (entries from homeschooled students are welcome)
  • poems may be any length, in any style, and on any subject
  • entries must be postmarked by March 31, 2019


Results will be announced in late May.


For more information, entry address, past winners, and judge’s comments, see www.sarahmookpoetrycontest.com.