Writing Prompt 3 Winner

Writing Prompt 3 was:

Write a poem about Spring which does not include any of these words: warm, rain, flower, sun, grass.

Bonus challenge: also avoid using the word “the” or any word ending in -ly

Congratulations to Jenny S., age 12, of Bloomington, Indiana, for composing this very creative poem.

C'mon, Summer

A chill yet lingers in soil and air,

As yet unbanished despite solar rays

Washing across them.

Fragments of color

Erupt from muddy graves,

Winter's sleep dispelled.

Tiny buds form, unfurl, explode

Into vibrant green.

My eyelids glow pink

As I stare through them

At Apollo's chariot,

A silent promise that summer will arrive

But not soon enough for me.

Writing Prompt 2 Winner

I was completely blown away by this snippet from Terry G., age 15, of Norfolk, VA. He took last week's prompt and went way above and beyond anything I was expecting.

The prompt was: Describe your house (or somewhere else) using only the senses of hearing, feeling, smell, and taste (no sight!).

Terry went with "somewhere else" and definitely knocked it out of the park. Enjoy.

The sharp clatter of hooves on cobblestones vanished at least an hour ago, replaced by rhythmic pounding on a hard-packed dirt road. As we make a sudden turn to the right, their gait slows to a walk, and deep grass muffles their progress.

No more dust at least, I think. I try once again to clear my throat, to cough up the cloying dirt, but the gag makes it impossible. The weak spasms bounce my body against the back of the man who guides our horse, scraping my cheek against his coarse shirt.

Murmuring voices drift from ahead, but they are too indistinct to make out over the jangle of harnesses, the rustle of slender legs through tall grass, the blowing of the nearly exhausted horses.

A swirling gust dries the dusty sweat on my face, carrying with it the scent of orchids and cowberries. The meadow we’re crossing must boast a respectable display of flowers, but the men were quite thorough with my blindfold and I can’t see a petal. I wouldn’t even be sure the sun was still up were it not warming my hair.

A moment later, the world grows suddenly colder as the sunlight vanishes and the thump of hooves on grass is replaced by rustling leaves and snapping twigs. A patch of woods, perhaps a forest. The trees could not have been too thickly clustered, as we ride another fifteen minutes before finally pulling to a stop.

The man before me dismounts and unties the cord that bind my legs to the horse. I am dragged from my seat and unceremoniously dumped on the ground. Before I can stand up, or even work some circulation into my dead legs, my ankles are pushed together and wrapped with rope.

“Comfortable, your Lordship?” a cruel voice asks, before breaking into a raucous laugh. Coarse hands drag me across the ground and prop me against a tree. Another rope is looped under my arms and wrapped around the tree, tugging against my chest as it is tied on the far side.

Over the next hour, they unsaddle the horses, build a fire, cook their dinner. My stomach rumbles at the smell of a savory stew, venison as near as I can tell. Despite my hunger, I don’t think I could keep anything down. Not that it matters. No one offers me even a single bite. I taste nothing but the dust of the road that still clings to my gag.

The men are careful. Far more careful than I would have credited. Talk is minimal. There are no threats, no boasting, no banter. Not a single name gets used, nor any hint of where they are taking me, or why. Though why seems obvious. It must be for money. My family has no influence at court that might be manipulated, but they do have plenty of money.

Tree frogs and crickets begin their nighttime song. The breeze has died, but the cold seeps in from every side. I am too far from the fire to enjoy any of its warmth. No one offers me a cloak or a blanket. It will be a long, uncomfortable night.

I lean my head back against the tree. Coarse bark grinds against my skin. When I tip my head forward again to try another angle, strands of my hair cling to the tree. Great. Just what I needed. Pine sap in my hair, on top of everything else. There is nothing for it. I settle my head back again, hoping to find a more comfortable position.

I know I must have dozed off somehow. The frogs have quieted enough to tell me a couple of hours have passed. Now their mating cries vie against the snoring of my captors. I am just about to try sleeping again when I realize someone is right next to me. I can feel the radiant warmth of their body on my cheek.

“Don’t make a sound.”

The whisper borders on the inaudible, the speaker’s lips so close to my ear that they tickle it. The words bring a smile to my face and hope to my heart for the first time since I was seized.

Irina. I should have known she’d find me.

Cold steel rubs against my wrist as a wickedly sharp knife slices through my bonds. In a moment my hands are free. I work to silently rub some feeling back into them as the knife moves to my feet, to my gag, and at last to my blindfold. The knife vanishes, to be replaced by strong, slender hands. Irina helps me to my feet. She doesn’t make a sound. I do. But not so much that anyone could hear it over the reverberating snores.

“Don’t move unless you have to,” Irina breaths. “If you must, head left. My horse is near the road. I’ll be right back.”

The night is dark, the fire down to the last faint embers, the leaves blocking the starlight. I can barely make out the tree next to me, can’t see the sleeping shapes on the ground at all. That’s okay. I don’t want to.

I close my eyes and listen to Irina work. I hear nothing of her movements, but I can track her nonetheless as she moves through the camp. One by one, the snores go silent. I almost feel sorry for them.

Almost.

Writing Prompt 1 Winner

Congratulations to Sean M., 16, of Lincoln, Nebraska, for submitting the winning response to Weekend Writing Prompt 1.

The prompt was: Your parents accidentally leave something sitting out that you were never meant to discover.

Here's Sean's story.

Maybe I Should Have Just Asked

Now, before you do anything rash, give me a minute or two to explain what’s been going on. I think you’ll agree that it’s all my parents’ fault, and I really shouldn’t be blamed for any of it.

I’ll be the first to admit that I’ve always been a bit too curious for my own good, and it’s gotten me into trouble before, though nothing like this. Even so, I’d never though too much about the file cabinet that Dad keeps locked all the time. And I’d never even seen the lock box that was sitting open on his desk yesterday afternoon. But Dad freaked when I walked in and saw the box. He shoved some papers into it and locked it before I could get a look at them. The locked box went into the file cabinet, and it got locked, too.

Despite my curiosity, that might have been the end of it. Dad keeps the keys on him at all times. I had no chance of getting into the file cabinet without some serious tools, and there was no way I could get at the box without leaving major evidence that I had.

I asked Dad what was in the box.

“Financial papers,” he said. “Life insurance, stuff like that. Nothing you need to worry about.”

Uh huh. Right. Sure, maybe parents don’t like their teenage kids thinking about life insurance and death and all that junk. I get that. But Dad’s reaction was way overboard for something that simple.

Just then, Mom pulled into the driveway, back from the grocery store. Dad went out to help her unload. I lagged behind for a few seconds, fake tying my shoe, then checked the top of the desk as soon as Dad was out of sight. Notes from work were scattered around, along with several spreadsheets (Dad’s an accountant, possibly the dullest job in the history of the world). I was about to give up when I saw something that didn’t fit tucked most of the way under a page full of numbers.

It was a birth certificate. No big deal. I had seen mine a couple of times, most recently when I got my temps. I was about to tuck it back where it was when I read the name.

Faustino Torini.

I had never heard the name before. At first, I wondered if it was some distant uncle or something, but this guy was born in 2003, the same year as me. The same day, too.

“Tony, come give us a hand!” Mom called.

My time was up. I had only a split second to make a decision. I made the wrong one. I should have just put it back on the desk, but I didn’t. I slipped the birth certificate into my pocket instead.

After supper, I headed upstairs and pulled the paper out from under my pillow where I had stashed it. There was no question about it. Faustino Torini, born January 17th, 2003. The exact same day as me. But this kid was born in New York City. His parents were Giorgio Torini and Delfina Speranza, also both born in New York. I’d never heard of either of them, either.

Except...

Giorgio’s birthday was June 9th, just like Dad’s. And Delfina’s birthday was November 22nd, just like Mom’s. I thought the years might be the same, too, though I couldn’t remember for sure.

But I was Anthony Miller, Dad was Michael Miller, and Mom was Angela Watterson Miller. I’d been born in Fostoria, Ohio, and lived here my entire life. My parents were born in Akron and Pittsburgh.

Just what the heck was going on here?

Why did Dad keep a birth certificate for some random kid locked up with his important papers? If that’s really what they were. And what was up with the birth dates?

I suppose I could have asked my parents, but I doubted that I would get any answers, and I would definitely get in serious trouble. Although, being grounded and losing the car keys for a month doesn’t sound so bad in retrospect, given the current situation.

I turned to the internet, instead.

For all the good it did me.

There were exactly zero hits for ‘Faustino Torini.’ Zilch. Nada. It was like the kid never existed. I figured he might go by a nickname, but had no clue what it might be.

‘Delfina Speranza’ turned up a few dozen hits, but they were all in Italian. Same with ‘Giorgio Torini.’ As far as I could tell, none of these people lived in the United States, or ever had.

I went to bed more confused than ever. It looked like I was going to have to confront my parents after all. But that could wait for morning. I wanted to sleep on it first.

There were so many things I might have done differently. I could have never looked for the birth certificate in the first place. I could have left it where it was, unread. I could have asked Mom and Dad about it. I could have not done all those internet searches. I could have tried more variations on the names.

That last one, as it turns out, was rather important. I didn’t know it at the time, but while ‘Giorgio Torini’ had very few hits, if I had tried ‘George Torini’ I would have found quite a few. Most of them about the time he spent as an accountant for the mob, or the trial of several major Mafioso where he turned state’s evidence, landing them in jail, before he was swept away into the witness protection program with his wife Fina and their infant son.

It’s all a matter of trust, you see. If my parents had trusted me more, they would have already told me the truth. If I had trusted them more, I would have asked them what was going on. Instead, I did a bunch of internet searches that lit up the mob’s watch list like a Christmas tree, all of them traceable directly back to me. And when the front door got kicked in at three in the morning, I didn’t instantly jump out a window and start running, because I didn’t know that I should.

And that, Mr. Mob Hitman, is why I’d really rather you didn’t shoot me right now. I’m having a hard time coming to terms with all of this happening so suddenly and feeling rather vulnerable. I need some time to process.

Maybe you could come back in a couple of weeks and we’ll see how things are going then?