Writers of the Future Contest

Funded by the estate of writer L. Ron Hubbard, the Writers of the Future contest is open any non-professional author (no or very limited previous publications).

They are looking for science fiction, fantasy, and dark fantasy stories of up to 17,000 words in length. This contest does not accept poetry or stories intended for children.

The contest runs four times a year, and prizes are $1000, $750, and $500 each quarter. Quarterly winners are also eligible for the annual prize of $5000.

The current contest ends March 31, with the next round running from April 1 to June 30.

There is no entry fee.

For more details and to enter the contest, see the Writers of the Future website.

C. Wombat

Review: The Girl King by Mimi Yu

Lu may be the oldest of the Emperor’s children, both girls, but that in no way ensures that she will become Emperor after him. There has never been a female Emperor, and most of the land’s nobles want to keep it that way. Even though her entire life has been spent training to rule—in combat, in court etiquette, in history, in tactics—there is the very real chance that she will never get the opportunity to put them into practice.

Lu suddenly finds herself betrayed by everyone around her: tutors, generals, the man who would be her husband, and even her own parents. She must go on the run to find new supporters in her bid for the throne, with only the help of Nokhai, one of the shape-shifters whose family her own father destroyed. Meanwhile, her sister Minyi is trapped in the world that Lu leaves behind, and must struggle to discover her own identity now that she is no longer overshadowed by her older sister.

Mimi Yu presents a vivid, well-constructed fantasy world inspired by the empires of Asia. The imperial palace and courtly life are intricately detailed and portrayed—you can feel the weight of history surrounding Lu and vainly attempting to mold her into a role she does not want to accept. Yu effectively contrasts the disparity between the nobility and the common man without being blunt or overbearing.

The plot is as twisted as a nest of vipers, which leaves the pace of the book feeling a little slow at first as all of the strands are introduced. But there is nothing slow about most of the novel, and the ending is over almost too quickly, leaving you begging for more.

Released in January 2019, The Girl King is Mimi Yu’s first novel, but it is clear it won’t be her last. If you are a lover of high fantasy, imperfect characters, and shadowy intrigue that leaves you constantly guessing, The Girl King is the book for you.

C. Wombat

Are Adverbs Evil?

Writers use adverbs. From great writers to horrible writers, best sellers to those who will never be published, every writer uses adverbs.

So why do so many writers hate adverbs? Why do you so often see the advice to avoid them?

What Are Adverbs?

Hopefully you already know this one. Much like an adjective modifies a noun, an adverb is “a word or phrase that modifies or qualifies an adjective, verb, or other adverb or a word group, expressing a relation of place, time, circumstance, manner, cause, degree, etc.” A lot of folks think adverbs only modify verbs, but note that they can modify other things too, including adjectives.

For example: The dog ran quickly down the road.

Here’s, it’s obvious that quickly is an adverb. It tells us how the dog ran.

Example 2: The cat had unusually shiny fur.

Here, shiny is an adjective (it modifies the noun, fur), while unusually is an adverb that modifies the adjective (it modifies shiny, telling us more about the shininess of the fur).

Many adverbs are easy to spot because they end in -ly, but not all of them do.

Why Are They Bad?

So, if adverbs exist (and they certainly do), and every writer uses them, why do they tell you not to use them?

The answer isn’t that adverbs are evil. They are overused. In particular, they are used to shore up weak verbs or adjectives, rather than finding a stronger word to begin with.

Back to our first example. The dog ran quickly down the road.

There’s nothing inherently wrong with the sentence. By itself, it’s a perfectly understandable sentence. But as authors, we’re not going just for understandable. We want to craft lyrical, amazing sentences that capture the reader’s attention and make them say, “Wow, this is an incredible story!”

So how do we do that? Use stronger, more descriptive nouns and adjectives.

The dog dashed down the road. The dog scampered down the road. The dog raced down the road.

Every one of these sentences conveys a sense of running quickly, but because speed is already built into the verbs, no adverb is needed. We don’t need to write that the dog raced quickly down the road, because it’s difficult to imagine that it raced slowly down the road.

Overused Adverbs

Here’s a short list of frequently overused (and misused) adverbs:

very

really

totally

literally

often

actually

probably

suddenly

usually

kind of

extremely

truly

hopefully

perfectly

There are many others that you might overuse yourself, but these tend to be common to many writers. And in many cases, they can be eliminated.

Adverbs Aren’t Evil

There is nothing wrong with adverbs. They exist for a reason. But if you overuse them, your writing will look sloppy and amateur. Cut as many as you can, so that the adverbs you do choose to keep enhance your writing, rather than detract from it.

One rule of thumb is no more than one adverb per 300 words of text. For a standard letter-sized page, doubled spaced, 1” margins, and 12-point font, that means about one adverb per page.

If you use a few more, you may be safe. If you use a lot more, be prepared for criticism.

But don’t ever let anyone tell you that you can’t use any adverbs at all. They’re part of the language, and they aren’t evil.

C. Wombat

Weekend Writing Prompt 3

Write a poem about Spring which does not include any of these words: warm, rain, flower, sun, grass.

Bonus challenge: also avoid using the word “the” or any word ending in -ly

Be as creative as you can. Length is no object--in fact, the longer, the better. Come on, you can do better than a haiku.

If you come up with a good response, please consider sharing it. Complete THIS FORM with your poem and some basic info no later than Friday, March 22. I’ll pick my favorite response and share it on the blog on the following Friday, March 29.

C. Wombat

Writing Prompt 1 Winner

Congratulations to Sean M., 16, of Lincoln, Nebraska, for submitting the winning response to Weekend Writing Prompt 1.

The prompt was: Your parents accidentally leave something sitting out that you were never meant to discover.

Here's Sean's story.

Maybe I Should Have Just Asked

Now, before you do anything rash, give me a minute or two to explain what’s been going on. I think you’ll agree that it’s all my parents’ fault, and I really shouldn’t be blamed for any of it.

I’ll be the first to admit that I’ve always been a bit too curious for my own good, and it’s gotten me into trouble before, though nothing like this. Even so, I’d never though too much about the file cabinet that Dad keeps locked all the time. And I’d never even seen the lock box that was sitting open on his desk yesterday afternoon. But Dad freaked when I walked in and saw the box. He shoved some papers into it and locked it before I could get a look at them. The locked box went into the file cabinet, and it got locked, too.

Despite my curiosity, that might have been the end of it. Dad keeps the keys on him at all times. I had no chance of getting into the file cabinet without some serious tools, and there was no way I could get at the box without leaving major evidence that I had.

I asked Dad what was in the box.

“Financial papers,” he said. “Life insurance, stuff like that. Nothing you need to worry about.”

Uh huh. Right. Sure, maybe parents don’t like their teenage kids thinking about life insurance and death and all that junk. I get that. But Dad’s reaction was way overboard for something that simple.

Just then, Mom pulled into the driveway, back from the grocery store. Dad went out to help her unload. I lagged behind for a few seconds, fake tying my shoe, then checked the top of the desk as soon as Dad was out of sight. Notes from work were scattered around, along with several spreadsheets (Dad’s an accountant, possibly the dullest job in the history of the world). I was about to give up when I saw something that didn’t fit tucked most of the way under a page full of numbers.

It was a birth certificate. No big deal. I had seen mine a couple of times, most recently when I got my temps. I was about to tuck it back where it was when I read the name.

Faustino Torini.

I had never heard the name before. At first, I wondered if it was some distant uncle or something, but this guy was born in 2003, the same year as me. The same day, too.

“Tony, come give us a hand!” Mom called.

My time was up. I had only a split second to make a decision. I made the wrong one. I should have just put it back on the desk, but I didn’t. I slipped the birth certificate into my pocket instead.

After supper, I headed upstairs and pulled the paper out from under my pillow where I had stashed it. There was no question about it. Faustino Torini, born January 17th, 2003. The exact same day as me. But this kid was born in New York City. His parents were Giorgio Torini and Delfina Speranza, also both born in New York. I’d never heard of either of them, either.

Except...

Giorgio’s birthday was June 9th, just like Dad’s. And Delfina’s birthday was November 22nd, just like Mom’s. I thought the years might be the same, too, though I couldn’t remember for sure.

But I was Anthony Miller, Dad was Michael Miller, and Mom was Angela Watterson Miller. I’d been born in Fostoria, Ohio, and lived here my entire life. My parents were born in Akron and Pittsburgh.

Just what the heck was going on here?

Why did Dad keep a birth certificate for some random kid locked up with his important papers? If that’s really what they were. And what was up with the birth dates?

I suppose I could have asked my parents, but I doubted that I would get any answers, and I would definitely get in serious trouble. Although, being grounded and losing the car keys for a month doesn’t sound so bad in retrospect, given the current situation.

I turned to the internet, instead.

For all the good it did me.

There were exactly zero hits for ‘Faustino Torini.’ Zilch. Nada. It was like the kid never existed. I figured he might go by a nickname, but had no clue what it might be.

‘Delfina Speranza’ turned up a few dozen hits, but they were all in Italian. Same with ‘Giorgio Torini.’ As far as I could tell, none of these people lived in the United States, or ever had.

I went to bed more confused than ever. It looked like I was going to have to confront my parents after all. But that could wait for morning. I wanted to sleep on it first.

There were so many things I might have done differently. I could have never looked for the birth certificate in the first place. I could have left it where it was, unread. I could have asked Mom and Dad about it. I could have not done all those internet searches. I could have tried more variations on the names.

That last one, as it turns out, was rather important. I didn’t know it at the time, but while ‘Giorgio Torini’ had very few hits, if I had tried ‘George Torini’ I would have found quite a few. Most of them about the time he spent as an accountant for the mob, or the trial of several major Mafioso where he turned state’s evidence, landing them in jail, before he was swept away into the witness protection program with his wife Fina and their infant son.

It’s all a matter of trust, you see. If my parents had trusted me more, they would have already told me the truth. If I had trusted them more, I would have asked them what was going on. Instead, I did a bunch of internet searches that lit up the mob’s watch list like a Christmas tree, all of them traceable directly back to me. And when the front door got kicked in at three in the morning, I didn’t instantly jump out a window and start running, because I didn’t know that I should.

And that, Mr. Mob Hitman, is why I’d really rather you didn’t shoot me right now. I’m having a hard time coming to terms with all of this happening so suddenly and feeling rather vulnerable. I need some time to process.

Maybe you could come back in a couple of weeks and we’ll see how things are going then?

Podcast Contest for Writers Ages 8-13

Calling all #youngwriters – specifically those between 8 and 13 years old. Stone Soup has teamed up with AV Education, which produces the By Kids For Kids – Story Time Podcast. The podcast features stories performed by kids, and now for the first time, written by kids, too!

They are looking for original short stories between 500-1,000 words. For this contest, the theme is climate change. Your challenge: deliver a great story in a fun and accessible style. The Story Time podcast tends towards fantasy, magical, or fairy tale type stories, but any great story is acceptable.

Top prize includes having your story made into a podcast and featured on the Story Time website. First, second, and third prize winners will all have their stories published in Stone Soup as well.

The deadline for entries is April 15.

Check out the Stone Soup contest page for more details and a link to enter your story. Good luck!

C. Wombat